My orchestral tone poem Point Reyes from Chimney Rock takes its title and inspiration from a woodblock print (above) by contemporary artist Tom Killion. This work reflects on a coastal landscape in Point Reyes National Seashore in the San Francisco Bay Area (where I was born and raised). It was commissioned by the NYU Symphony and premiered at the Skirball Center for the Performing Arts in New York City on March 3, 2014.
In the following reflection, I share some of what went into the creation this piece. My intention is certainly not to dictate how to listen to my music—you are free to form your own conclusions and derive your own meaning from it!—but to hopefully illuminate the compositional process, both for laypeople and for other composers who may be interested in how I approached writing music inspired by a landscape.
(This is, of course, just one example of a compositional process as pursued by one composer: certainly not representative of other composers’ approaches in general, or even my own process for all pieces I write. I should add that, of course, my experiences composing are generally messier and more non-linear this tidy, after-the-fact narrative might suggest!)
Background and Initial Concept
…the simultaneous invigoration and comfort of the sweeping drama of the sea cliffs against vast sky and ocean, alongside the intimate, delicate beauty of wildflowers and grasses.
It’s perhaps worth noting that, at the time I acquired the print and composed this piece, I had never actually been on the Chimney Rock trail in the bright, spring weather depicted in the print; only foggy summer, when the grass is dry and brown and the iris blooms are long gone. However, the print strongly evoked for me the feeling of being in other, similar locations in Point Reyes and the Marin Headlands. And, as we will see, the mood of my music ended up relating to this landscape in both types of weather and seasonal conditions.
My initiating concept for Point Reyes from Chimney Rock was that, through my music, I wanted to convey the qualities of the landscape I feel are captured most powerfully in this print, and which I relate to most strongly from my own experiences in this landscape: the simultaneous invigoration and comfort of the sweeping drama of the sea cliffs against vast sky and ocean, alongside the intimate, delicate beauty of wildflowers and grasses.
The question, then, was: How to translate these characteristics into a musical experience?
Turning Landscape Inspirations into Musical Ideas
I’ve tried to musically represent and perhaps even guide the wandering of one’s gaze across an image or a scenic view.
In some ways, I’ve tried to musically represent and perhaps even guide the gradual wandering of one’s gaze across an image or a scenic view. Different sections or elements of the music are, during the compositional process, envisioned as responses to different areas of the image and place.
The first thing I wanted to respond to was the single most prominent element of the print: the bold bluffs on the ocean side of the Point Reyes peninsula. I thought my piece should open with some kind of big, striking gesture, and so I began by drafting what eventually became the opening measures of the piece:
All audio excerpts are from a live recording by the NYU Symphony.
I chose a full orchestration for this section, utilizing all of the players in the orchestra simultaneously, to convey the power and scale of this image and concept. The major harmonies and broad, filled-in registration—from the timpani and basses up through to the piccolo—were intended to evoke the crisp colors and clarity of light of the Northern California coast on a sunny spring day.
For the theme itself, I used leaps in pitch to reflect the verticality and angularity of the steeply sloping bluffs, which are articulated through assertive, bold rhythms conveying the bluffs’ strength and nobility:
Next, I wanted to explore the juxtaposition of this view against the more intimate elements of the landscape, represented in Killion’s print by wild irises. (This aspect of the image perhaps most drew me to it in the first place; as a viewer, this foreground element makes me feel like I’m “inside” the space of the picture, peering outwards.) This juxtaposition of macro and micro landscape features is something that I’ve been drawn back to repeatedly, and which I began exploring with my first-ever orchestral composition, which was inspired by Georgia O’Keeffe’s paintings.
For me, solo woodwinds have an extraordinary ability to communicate the subtle, intimate character of things that perhaps you would only notice if you take a moment to look down, crouching to the ground to closely observe this smaller word. One several occasions in my piece, a lyrical solo flute or oboe leads the music while the accompanying texture is reduced in order to let these gentler sounds come through:
Additionally, I wanted my music to contain some of the visceral sensation of being in this place, beyond its purely visual aspects. In particular, when I composed the second section of the piece I was thinking about the cool, sweeping coastal winds that one typically encounters in this area (which can be alternatively soothing and overwhelming), as well as the sensation of walking steadily on the trail.
In addition to this idea about the physical sensations of wind and walking, the material in this second section ended up developing a mood related to the muted, mysterious energy I feel from Chimney Rock on a dark, gray day, heavy with fog (which I experienced the first two times I visited!):
A Life of Its Own
Once I began working with all of these ideas that emerged before and during the process of writing the music, new musical material emerged that was not envisioned in direct response to either the print or the landscape. Those things acted as initiating prompts, setting the tone and direction of the piece. However, whenever working with “extramusical” source material I’ve always found I need to set those concerns aside for long stretches of work and focus purely on following the internal logic of the musical ideas—attempting to flesh these ideas out into a fully-formed expression.
…there should be a kind of “DNA” in a composition that suffuses every line or texture and makes it belong the world of that piece.
Along those lines, most of the second half of Point Reyes came out of sketches of variations on motivic material derived from the second section (described above in reference to sweeping winds and gray weather). At first, this music didn’t have a particularly direct relationship to Killion’s print or the landscape. However, it completely took on a life of its own and ended up becoming what might be my favorite material in the piece (and, perhaps unsurprisingly, the most pleasurable to work on):
When I was reflecting on my work while finishing up the piece, I realized that this latter part came not out of any specific feature of the landscape itself, but rather the way it makes me feel. There’s a mix of celebration and yearning—a sense of searching for something lost and precious—that I was striving to capture with this music. It may be seen as an expression of my perspective as someone who, for various reasons, spends most of her time in New York (approximately 10 months of the year), but is perpetually homesick for the coast of California!
Please feel free to ask questions or add comments below. Would you like to read more deconstructions of the compositional process for other works? Let me know.
I’d like to acknowledge Herschel Garfein, who was my studio teacher at the time I was writing Point Reyes from Chimney Rock and provided me with guidance during its development.
Learn more about Point Reyes National Seashore or the artwork of Tom Killion.
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